Gorgeous! You have a real flair with words, and your opening paragraph is very effective in capturing the reader's attention.
The presence exuded laziness, flirtyness, and pink. How a rietsu gave off pink was a mystery to her, but somehow it did The idea of his reiatsu giving off flirtiness and pink is extremely amusing to me. I coudln't stop giggling.
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
regna![[community profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/community.png){kind=small}
(no subject)
Date: 2007-10-01 03:35 am (UTC)The presence exuded laziness, flirtyness, and pink. How a rietsu gave off pink was a mystery to her, but somehow it did
The idea of his reiatsu giving off flirtiness and pink is extremely amusing to me. I coudln't stop giggling.